Subjective Crique

The art that I chose consist of a lot of white lines on a black back ground. I did not find this art work very appealing because of a few reasons. It has unique line curves and different variations of line work but the colors scheme is very bland to me, maybe not so much to others though. I also am not a fan of how the background is solid black, it does not appeal to my style. Overall I did think the lines were good but putting it all together I did not like the overall look and feel like it should be busier and  add some more colors. I would change this piece a lot to add more colors and give the background more than just a solid color. I would like to crop some lines out and zoom in to some lines to make them a bit bigger. I feel like adding a few shapes to the background will draw the eye around the art work. I want to add a bunch of colors, maybe even over doing it in color to bring it to life and have a sense of happiness. Another idea would be to tell a story, possibly the lines are running through someones body that is slowly falling apart. Leaving the colors black and white to give it the edgy feel. I will try both ideas and see what feels right and gives me a better vibe from the work.